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Ryan Mackenzie

203 words · 8 sentences · 13 clauses

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Average 88 / 100
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Claims 69%Reasoning 21%Thanks 5%The ask 5%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 89 wordscommunities throughout the Nation are seeing unprecedented growth in electricity demand, driven in large part by data centers and other energy-intensive facilities. That growing demand is already having a direct impact on communities like those that I represent in the Lehigh Valley and the Poconos, where, after 4 years of severe inflation under President Biden, residents are being put in a position where they could end up footing the energy bill for new data centers.1Off pointHidden agency The rapid growth of these facilities requires unprecedented new investments in our electric grid. Reasoning · 22 wordsWhile the grid capacity will catch up eventually, the short-term costs of those investments must not be passed on to families, seniors, Claims · 30 wordsand small businesses, many of whom don’t want data centers in their communities in the first place. That is why I am proud to cosponsor the bipartisan Ratepayer Protection Act, 2Reasoning · 20 wordsbecause large energy consumers who create the demand for new energy infrastructure should pay their fair share of the cost. Claims · 21 wordsWe can maintain local control of development activities while also protecting existing ratepayers, and that is exactly what this legislation does. Thanks · 10 wordsI thank Representative Evans for his partnership on this legislation, 3ThanksOff pointThe ask · 11 wordsand I urge all of my colleagues to support H.R. 9340.4

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