Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Vicente Gonzalez

398 words · 34 sentences · 44 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
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The ask 31%Positioning 24%Claims 31%Anecdote 9%Promise 6%

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Mr. Speaker, The ask · 29 wordsI rise today to ask you to urge President Trump to fulfill his promise to the city of Corpus Christi, Texas, a community he made a solemn promise to. Positioning · 6 wordsWe heard him loud and clear.Positioning Claims · 41 wordsWhen the President visited our city, he called our request for sustainable Federal funding for water projects a serious money ask.1 He then went on to say to the people of Corpus Christi: We are going to take care of it.2 The ask · 18 wordsToday, I am asking him to keep that promise, and I urge you to ensure that he does. Claims · 13 wordsCorpus Christi is a leading energy hub for the country and the world.3 Positioning · 23 wordsWater is not a partisan issue. It is not a luxury. It cannot wait for another election or another round of political speeches.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsReliable water in one of the most important energy hubs in our country is a national security concern. The ask · 6 wordsThe time to act is now. Claims · 23 wordsFamilies, hospitals, schools, military installations, small businesses, and thousands of workers who keep the port of Corpus Christi are relying on you today. Anecdote · 36 wordsI was born and raised in Corpus Christi.4 This is my hometown. I know its people. They work hard. They pay their taxes, and they help power the economy of Texas, the country, and the world.Anecdote Positioning · 20 wordsThey should not have to wonder whether their community will have enough water to survive and grow into the future.Positioning The ask · 40 wordsWe need the administration to act immediately, identify the Federal funding available, designate the responsible agency, and provide a firm timetable to get this done. We need the President to deliver. If congressional action is required, send it to me. Promise · 22 wordsI am ready to work with Republicans, Democrats, State leaders, and local officials to get this done and get this done now. Positioning · 22 wordsEveryone has a responsibility here. Local and State leaders must also do their part, and the Federal Government must fulfill its commitment.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsremind the President that Corpus Christi welcomed him. Claims · 27 wordsHe made a promise to the people, and it is his obligation to fulfill those promises. Its people listened to him. They took him at his word. The ask · 21 wordsNow it is time for action, Mr. President. Release the Federal support. Help us secure a dependable, long-term, sustainable water supply. Positioning · 25 wordsA promise made in Corpus Christi must be a promise kept. Our families cannot live on promises. They need water, and they need it now.Positioning

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