A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 14%Positioning 12%Claims 68%Anecdote 6%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 20 wordstoday I rise to honor Catherine Garduno who recently passed away in Penasco, New Mexico, at the age of 96.1ThanksPositioning · 9 wordsCatherine embodied resilience, faith, service, and love of country.PositioningClaims · 55 wordsThe youngest of 12 children born to a sheepherder and a cook, she became her family’s first college graduate, earning an education degree from the College of St. Joseph in Albuquerque.2A letter to Senator Pete Domenici brought her to our Nation’s Capital, an experience she shared throughout her 35 years as an elementary schoolteacher.3Anecdote · 9 wordsShe even taught my district director in third grade.AnecdoteClaims · 44 wordsWidowed, Catherine raised six children with strength and devotion.4A devout Catholic, she received the Archbishop of Santa Fe’s St. Francis Award for Volunteer of the Year.5Her legacy passed down through her nephew, the late Raul Grijalva, 6and her great-niece, Congresswoman Adelita Grijalva.7Positioning · 8 wordsHer courage, faith, hope, and love shaped generations.Positioning