A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 24%Claims 37%Thanks 15%Positioning 23%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 16 wordsI rise today to celebrate the 25th anniversary of the Western New York Area Labor Federation.1GreetingClaims · 60 wordsFor 25 years, the WNYALF has fought to ensure working people in our community have a strong voice to secure higher wages, safer workplaces, better benefits, and greater economic stability for themselves and their families.The Buffalo-Niagara region was built by labor unions.They built our factories, our roads, our schools, our neighborhoods, and the communities that we call home.Thanks · 29 wordsI want to recognize my dear friend, the president of the WNYALF, Denise Abbott, 2and the countless union members, organizers, stewards, and leaders who have carried this movement forward.ThanksPositioning · 27 wordsUnder Denise’s leadership, the WNYALF continues the essential work of bringing fairness and dignity to the workplace and putting more money into the pockets of working families.PositioningClaims · 12 wordsThe future of western New York will be built by working people, Positioning · 18 wordsand we will always fight to ensure that organized labor is the defining force in building that future.PositioningVague promiseGreeting · 31 wordsI congratulate the Western New York Area Labor Federation on one- quarter century of solidarity, service, and strength.Here is to the next 25 years and many, many more to come.Greeting