A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 14%Claims 62%Positioning 8%Thanks 16%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 20 wordsI rise today to recognize Titusville Police Officer Jason Van Zile for an extraordinary act of courage and selfless service.GreetingClaims · 88 wordsDuring a sudden and dangerous storm on the Indian River Lagoon, a family paddleboarding near Parrish Park was thrown into the water after a violent storm.1Officer Van Zile was the first officer to arrive.2Seeing that there was no time to wait, he removed his gear and entered the water.Despite dangerous conditions and a safety rope that became caught in submerged rocks, the officer continued to rescue all three members of the family, including two children.3He is a former lifeguard, a United States Marines veteran, 4Positioning · 12 wordsand his courage that day reflects a lifetime of service to others.PositioningThanks · 23 wordsI congratulate Officer Van Zile on being named the city of Titusville’s Employee of the Month and thank him for his incredible service.5Thanks