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Analilia Mejia

322 words · 13 sentences · 21 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 7%Positioning 29%Claims 35%Procedure 7%Anecdote 8%Reasoning 15%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 21 wordsI rise today to recognize National Hispanic Heritage Month and celebrate the vibrant Latino communities across New Jersey’s 11th Congressional District.1Greeting Positioning · 17 wordsOur district, at the crossroads of critical moments in history, is as diverse as it is historic.Positioning Claims · 14 wordsCommunities from across the diaspora proudly call the 11th District home, including my own. Procedure · 22 wordsRecognizing the impact of the Latino community, without naming the crisis our community faces would be a disservice at this moment, however.Procedure Anecdote · 27 wordsAs the daughter of two Latino immigrants, I was raised by parents who recognized the importance of embracing my Nation, while holding on to who I was.Anecdote Positioning · 75 wordsFollowing the scores of immigrants who arrived upon these shores, Latino Americans have created communities that enriched their adopted and beloved land, while remembering the culture of their parents and grandparents. Like many, irrespective of their culture or ethnic backgrounds, we stand appalled at the way in which those at the highest perches of this land use racist tropes and dog whistles to divide a nation of immigrants yearning for liberty and justice for all.Positioning Claims · 98 wordsAcross my district, this warfare is made evident by every unjust arrest, through the gutting of safety net programs, and the wholesale vilification of a community that loves this Nation enough to serve it, grow it, and defend it. Violent arrests, courthouse ambushes, the denial of justice all lay bare the willingness of some to turn away from what actually makes America great: ``one nation under God, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all.’’ Some say that upholding these words somehow takes away the freedoms and opportunities of those whose ancestors arrived upon these shores in generations past. Reasoning · 48 wordsThis flawed thinking treats justice as if it were finite, as if it were cake, and sharing a piece somehow lessens what is placed upon your plate. Well, Madam Speaker, justice, freedom, and opportunity are not cake. It does not run out if someone else gets a slice.

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