A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 64%Reasoning 4%Thanks 14%The ask 18%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. President, Claims · 98 wordsthe Third Review Conference of States Parties to the Convention on Cluster Munitions is underway in Laos, a country where millions of U.S. cluster munitions from the Vietnam war continue to maim and kill civilians.12Large areas of provinces bordering Vietnam remain contaminated with these deadly explosives.3The U.S. is helping clear these munitions, 4but more resources are needed.Vague promiseCluster munitions continue to be used today in other armed conflicts.5A provision in U.S. law authored by my predecessor Senator Leahy prohibits the sale or transfer of cluster munitions with a failure rate of more than 1 percent.6Reasoning · 10 wordsThat was an important step, but further action is necessary.Vague promiseClaims · 57 wordsCluster munitions are delivered by artillery or aircraft, disbursed by hundreds or thousands over wide areas.7If they detonate on impact as designed, they threaten the lives and livelihoods of anyone-- combatant or noncombatant--within a large radius.Cluster munitions that fail to detonate pose an unacceptable risk to innocent people for years or decades, just like landmines.Thanks · 34 wordsI commend the states parties to the Convention and the nongovernmental organizations around the world, like Legacies of War in the United States, which have worked to rid the world of these indiscriminate weapons.ThanksThe ask · 44 wordsThe U.S. and the other major powers should join both the Convention on Cluster Munitions and the Anti-personnel Mine Ban Convention and work to end the production, stockpiling, transfer, Vague promiseand use of these weapons that have no place in the arsenal of civilized nations.