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Brad Sherman

834 words · 46 sentences · 68 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
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Procedure 2%Greeting 2%Claims 46%Positioning 2%Reasoning 29%Thanks 5%Aside 7%Anecdote 7%Promise 1%The ask 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI rise in support of H.R. 10167, the Common Cents Act, sponsored by Representative McClain.3Greeting Claims · 21 wordsLast year, the President announced on Truth Social--not the best way to make a government announcement--that Treasury would stop minting pennies.1 Positioning · 14 wordsFrankly, I disagree with almost everything the President does, but this one makes sense.PositioningOff point Claims · 17 wordsI have been advocating for the abolition of the penny for over 20 years in our committee, Reasoning · 10 wordsand it is time that we move forward on this. Claims · 67 wordsFollowing this announcement, the Treasury moved forward, and the Mint has stopped producing pennies.2 Unfortunately, the decision to stop minting pennies ignored the authority of Congress in regulating currency and overseeing a major transition away from producing pennies. We saw that this abrupt decision resulted in major consequences across the country that led to penny shortages for banks, retailers, and consumers and created confusion in the economy. Reasoning · 29 wordsIt is not enough to stop minting pennies. We need a bill that tells retailers and customers how much they are supposed to pay in nickels, dimes, and dollars. Procedure · 1 wordsHowever, ProcedureReasoning · 17 wordsas written, this legislation addresses many of these issues and establishes much-needed standards and guidelines going forward. Thanks · 38 wordsSince we marked up the Common Cents Act in our committee, this bill has continued to be meaningfully improved, thanks to the work of our ranking member, Maxine Waters, and other Financial Services Committee Democrats, including Representative Garcia.Thanks Claims · 64 wordsThe Common Cents Act formally directs the Secretary of the Treasury to stop minting pennies.4 It also allows the Mint to test a lower-cost composition for the nickel, 5which chiefly would be zinc, and to make use of the zinc that is now going into pennies. Moreover, by using zinc for the nickel, not only will we save money, but it will be lighter, Reasoning · 17 wordsand that will be important for the cost of those who are transporting large quantities of coins, Aside · 10 wordsand it will be a little lighter in your pocket.Aside Reasoning · 8 wordsThis bill not only deals with the penny, Claims · 14 wordsbut it also improves the nickel. The bill provides clarity on rounding cash transactions. Anecdote · 31 wordsWhen I proposed in committee 20 years ago, and I proposed it at townhalls, people were concerned that somehow this would lead to higher prices and that somehow retailers would benefit.Anecdote Reasoning · 70 wordsThe fact is, it is the consumer, not the retailer, who determines whether you buy two nail files at the same time and that happens to round down, Unearned certaintyand then buy another two nail files at the same time, and that transaction is rounded down. I can’t imagine anybody doing that to save a nickel, but it is the consumer, not the retailer, that decides what goes into the basket. Aside · 17 wordsI can’t imagine anybody looking at this. If somebody does care, it is the retailer in control.Aside Claims · 16 wordsWe have formal rules here on rounding down when it is 2 cents or 1 cent. Reasoning · 8 wordsThat is important for commerce to go forward. Claims · 60 wordsUnder this bill, the Federal Reserve would be required to issue a strategic plan for managing and limiting disruptions in the penny supply.6 Recently, in August, the Senate added a new section that requires the Treasury to submit notification to the Senate Banking Committee and the House Financial Services Committee regarding potential plans to discontinue any coin, among other requirements.7 Reasoning · 12 wordsThis is important because Congress plays a key role in these processes. Claims · 5 wordsThere has been some disruption, Reasoning · 11 wordsand we need to be in a position to manage it.Vague promise Anecdote · 25 wordsMy focus on the fact that we didn’t need pennies arises from the fact that I used to head the second largest sales tax agency.8Anecdote Claims · 78 wordsWhat consumers may not know is that every time you do a transaction--last year, last decade, 20 years ago--the amount you pay the retailer is subject to rounding. There is a tax of 5 percent or 8 percent, and the amount you actually owe is $1.125, which is rounded down. We have been rounding transactions for a long time in this country. Now, we will be rounding to the nearest nickel instead of rounding to the nearest penny. Reasoning · 19 wordsFurther, by eliminating the penny, we create extra room in the cash register where the penny used to go. Claims · 30 wordsThat room could be used for a dollar coin. We all know that it costs more than a dollar to print a dollar and that a paper dollar wears out.Unearned certainty Promise · 8 wordsI look forward to popularizing the dollar coin. Reasoning · 11 wordsThis will be a boon to our transit agencies, vending machines, Claims · 8 wordsand others when people use a dollar coin. Aside · 30 wordsGrowing up, we had a dollar coin. We just called it a quarter. We had a quarter. We used it. It was worth about what a dollar is worth today.9AsideOff point Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 28 wordswhile I am not a big fan of the inflation that has taken place in my lifetime, I do think it is time to popularize the dollar coin. The ask · 8 wordsI urge my colleagues to support this bill, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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