Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Mike Kennedy

384 words · 26 sentences · 31 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 13%Positioning 21%Anecdote 15%Procedure 4%Claims 24%Reasoning 20%The ask 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsI thank Mr. Westerman for the time to speak.Thanks Positioning · 30 wordsOur constituents know there is too often a gap between the rules Washington writes and the realities Americans face.Unearned certainty Nowhere is that gap more apparent than in our healthcare system.Positioning Anecdote · 56 wordsI know that reality well. I have been a doctor for 25 years and continue to see patients.1 I sit with families during some of the most difficult moments of their lives, and I see firsthand how frustrating paperwork and red tape can be when what matters most is getting someone the care that they need.Anecdote Procedure · 13 wordsThat experience is why I rise today in support of my bill, H.R.Procedure Claims · 9 words8658, the Indian Health Service Emergency Claims Parity Act. Procedure · 4 wordsThis bill is simple: ProcedurePositioning · 4 wordsPut patients before paperwork.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsToday, when an American Indian or Alaska Native patient receives emergency care outside the Indian Health Service, the IHS must be notified within 72 hours.2 When missed, a family can be left with the bill for care that should have been covered. Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 31 wordsthat rule was written from behind a desk, not beside a hospital bed. Anyone who has worked in healthcare knows that 72 hours can pass in what feels like an instant.PositioningUnearned certainty Reasoning · 18 wordsFamilies should be focused on their loved one’s recovery, not on whether they met a Federal notification deadline. Claims · 22 wordsH.R. 8658 extends that window to 15 days so families can take care of their loved ones first and the paperwork second.3 Positioning · 8 wordsThis is what good government should look like.Positioning Reasoning · 29 wordsWhen a rule does not reflect the reality people face, we should fix it. When government bureaucracy gets in the way of common sense, we should cut through it. Positioning · 7 wordsMy congressional colleagues and I understand that.Positioning Reasoning · 31 wordsWe need a government that is smarter, quicker, and more responsive to the people it serves. We need a government that is streamlined and close to home, not bloated and distant.Off point Claims · 21 wordsThis is one practical, commonsense fix, and there are many more like it across our government and throughout our healthcare system. Thanks · 42 wordsI thank Chairman Westerman, my colleagues on the Natural Resources Committee, our outstanding staff on the Committee as well as my staff, 4and my bipartisan colleagues for their work on this fix and their commitment to making government work for the people.Thanks Mr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsI urge my colleagues to support H.R. 8658.

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