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Bruce Westerman

450 words · 21 sentences · 30 clauses

Statement grade
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76 / 100, held down by Signal
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Anecdote 50%Reasoning 23%Claims 25%Procedure 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 226 wordsas we consider water in our country, I want to point out a couple of trips that I have made recently. One was to the little town of Beaver, Utah, where they had a 100,000-acre forest fire, 1and a few weeks later, they had an inch to an inch and a half of rain, 2which normally would be very welcome there, but because this forest fire basically clear-cut this whole canyon that provides the water for the town of Beaver. Instead of replenishing their water supply, what it did was wash vast amounts of soil and debris into the watershed. It took out three hydropower plants.3 It washed mud and debris across bridges and took them out. It also washed all this debris into the town and had their water system offline for an extended period of time. We often don’t associate forest health and water as much as we should. This is a crisis that is facing us across the country. That is why it is important to have legislation like Representative Wittman has proposed here. I was in southwest Colorado at the end of last week, 4and we flew over another 100,000-acre fire.5 We saw, again, how when the land is denuded, to use a word from Teddy Roosevelt, and soil is no longer held in place and we get rain, it causes catastrophes.Anecdote Reasoning · 18 wordsIt doesn’t have to be this way. We can have safe, healthy drinking water all across this country. Claims · 87 wordsActually, about two-thirds of our water comes from forested landscapes.6 We have seen how important this is, even in places like New York City, where they have a tremendous water system that people, putting a lot of forethought into this many, many decades ago, protected the watershed and protected the water going into New York. We see it in Boston. We typically think of these forest issues out West, but the Quabbin Reservoir in Boston is another forested area that is protected and managed strictly for water.7 Reasoning · 86 wordsIt is because of research and efforts that have happened for many years that give us the science to understand how to manage the landscape to produce the water that we all need. When we talk about an ounce of prevention being worth a pound of cure, we know that managing our forests gives us that ounce of prevention. It saves a lot of money in the long run and saves a lot of headaches and hard work to restore these systems in the long run, Claims · 26 wordsand it is important that we continue to do the research and fund these programs so that we can provide safe, clean water to all Americans.Vague promise Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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