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Val T. Hoyle

207 words · 14 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
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Procedure 8%Claims 75%Reasoning 12%The ask 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Claims · 156 wordsH.R. 8121, introduced by my colleague Delegate Plaskett, will honor the legacy of Peter G.1 Thurland by naming Christiansted Bandstand after him.2 This bandstand is a historic landmark at the Christiansted National Historic Site in St. Croix, U.S. Virgin Islands.3 It symbolizes the rich, cultural heritage of St. Croix and has served as a community gathering place since its construction. Peter G. Thurland was a central figure in the St. Croix community. Mr. Thurland was known as a master craftsman, musician, and proud veteran who served in the Navy Band.4 Not only did he perform there during his military service until his honorable discharge but he personally helped design and construct the bandstand. He continued to advocate for the arts and founded the St. Croix Community Band where he personally trained generations of young musicians.5 Efforts to recognize Mr. Thurland go back to the 103rd Congress with the legislation first introduced by Delegate Ron de Lugo.6 Reasoning · 24 wordsIt is time to honor Mr. Thurland’s legacy and ensure that his impact on the cultural and civic life of St. Croix is remembered. Mr. Speaker, The ask · 10 wordsI urge all of my colleagues to support this legislation, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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