Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Jennifer A. Kiggans

356 words · 20 sentences · 23 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Claims 63%Reasoning 11%Positioning 11%Thanks 6%The ask 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsI rise today in support of my bill, H.R. 5063, the Safe Beaches, Safe Swimmers Act.1Procedure Claims · 129 wordsI have the privilege of representing a district that lives on the beach and the bay. For families across coastal Virginia and the millions of Americans who visit our Federal beaches every year, water safety is incredibly important. Last year, we saw firsthand what can happen when the Federal Government fails to adequately staff these Federal beaches. Following a Federal hiring freeze, Assateague Island National Seashore was unable to provide its normal lifeguard coverage at the Federal beach in Chincoteague, Virginia.2 Families continued visiting and swimming, but the lifeguards they had come to rely on were not there. Our local leaders stepped up. The town of Chincoteague and Accomack County took on unforeseen costs to make sure lifeguards returned to the beach and families could safely enjoy the water.3 Reasoning · 17 wordsOur local governments should never be left scrambling to solve a Federal staffing problem on their own. Claims · 11 wordsThat is why I introduced the Safe Beaches, Safe Swimmers Act. Procedure · 6 wordsMy bill provides a commonsense solution.Procedure Claims · 83 wordsWhen the Department of the Interior determines that a Federal swimming area is facing a lifeguard staffing shortage, it can partner with local governments to provide the necessary coverage.4 Importantly, when a local government steps up to provide those lifeguards, the Federal Government will reimburse it for the reasonable costs it incurs.5 This applies to designated swimming areas managed by the National Park Service, Fish and Wildlife Service, Bureau of Land Management, 6and Bureau of Reclamation that are normally monitored by Federal lifeguards. Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordsthis bill is about public safety, accountability, and giving our communities a solution when Washington falls short.Positioning Thanks · 20 wordsI am grateful to the local leaders on the Eastern Shore who worked with us after seeing this problem firsthand.Thanks Positioning · 23 wordsI am proud that we have an opportunity to make sure communities across the country have another tool to keep their beaches safe.Positioning Reasoning · 22 wordsNo family visiting a Federal beach should have to wonder whether a lifeguard will be there if and when an emergency happens. Mr. Speaker, The ask · 12 wordsI urge my colleagues to support the Safe Beaches, Safe Swimmers Act.

Analyzed on