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Bruce Westerman

344 words · 16 sentences · 22 clauses

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Average 89 / 100
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Procedure 3%Greeting 6%Claims 27%Reasoning 39%Thanks 21%The ask 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise in support of H.R. 5063, the Safe Beaches, Safe Swimmers Act, 1which is championed by Representative Jen Kiggans of Virginia.2Greeting Claims · 92 wordsEach year, millions of Americans visit our Federal lands to spend time outdoors with their families. Whether they are hiking a trail, camping, fishing, or spending a day at the beach, visitors should be able to safely enjoy the incredible recreation opportunities our public lands provide. At federally managed beaches and swimming areas, lifeguards play an important role in keeping visitors safe, but when Federal agencies experience lifeguard staffing shortages, they do not always have the flexibility to quickly fill those gaps, even when trained local lifeguards may be available to help. Reasoning · 134 wordsRepresentative Kiggans’ bill provides a commonsense solution. Her legislation allows the National Park Service, U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, Bureau of Land Management, and Bureau of Reclamation to partner with local government agencies to provide lifeguard services when Federal lifeguards are in short supply at designated swimming areas.3 Under these agreements, local lifeguards can provide services visitors depend on, including water rescue and first aid, during the peak summer season. Representative Kiggans’ legislation recognizes that the Federal Government cannot always solve staffing challenges quickly. When qualified local partners are willing and able to help keep visitors safe, Federal land managers should have the flexibility to work with them. These partnerships can help maintain lifeguard coverage, support continued public access, and make sure families can enjoy some of our country’s most popular outdoor recreational activities. Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 71 wordsI again thank Representative Kiggans for her leadership on this legislation introduced after her constituents highlighted lifeguard shortages that limited access and impacted safety at Assateague Island National Seashore.4 She worked diligently with her local community and National Park Service leadership to find a solution that will not only help keep her constituents and visitors safe but also ensure millions of visitors can continue to enjoy Virginia’s pristine and world-class beaches.Thanks Mr. Speaker, The ask · 16 wordsI urge my colleagues to support H.R. 5063, and I reserve the balance of my time.

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