Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Bruce Westerman

417 words · 21 sentences · 26 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
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Procedure 4%Greeting 5%Claims 40%Anecdote 19%Reasoning 17%Promise 11%Thanks 2%The ask 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise in support of H.R. 4931, the National Park System Long-Term Lease Investment Act, introduced by Representative Murphy of North Carolina.1Greeting Claims · 45 wordsAcross the National Park System, private businesses and organizations lease buildings and other historic facilities, investing in these properties while providing important services to park visitors. These public-private partnerships can help put underutilized properties to productive use while supporting the long-term stewardship of park assets. Anecdote · 78 wordsMy hometown of Hot Springs National Park is a model for how these public-private partnerships can transform local economies, create jobs, improve access, and enhance the visitor experience. Through historic leasing on Bathhouse Row, once dilapidated bathhouses have been transformed into a brewery, a modern spa and bathhouse facility, 4and a hotel. Ongoing renovations financed under the Great American Outdoors Act will open up even more opportunities to lease historic bathhouses to more small businesses in this community.5Anecdote Claims · 94 wordsUnfortunately, even when these partnerships work well, existing law can limit the National Park Service’s flexibility to extend a successful lease without starting a new competitive process.6 H.R. 4931 provides a targeted solution. To qualify for an extension, the original lease must be at least 5 years, the lessee must be in good standing, 2and the extension must be in the National Park Service’s best interests. If those requirements are met, the bill allows a lease to be extended once for up to 10 years without issuing a new request for bids or proposals.3 Reasoning · 70 wordsProviding this flexibility will give successful lessees greater certainty to continue investing in park facilities while reducing unnecessary administrative burdens on the National Park Service. Just as importantly, it creates important safeguards by limiting the authority to lessees who have already demonstrated a successful track record. While this is a good bill, there is more that can be done to ensure the National Park Service fully leverages potential private-sector partners. Claims · 29 wordsThe Senate version of this legislation includes a commonsense provision allowing leases to extend up to 99 years, 7which will attract greater investment and create greater economic opportunity nationwide. Promise · 44 wordsAlthough we were unable to reach an agreement in committee with our minority to include a similar provision in the House bill, I look forward to working with my bipartisan and bicameral colleagues on this concept as the bill continues through the legislative process.Vague promise Thanks · 10 wordsI thank Representative Murphy for his leadership on this legislation.Thanks The ask · 8 wordsI urge my colleagues to support H.R. 4931, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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