Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Brian Jack

Republican on Honoring Chris Fisher 2026-09-14

206 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade

C+

Average 69 / 100

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Greeting 24%Anecdote 27%Claims 41%Thanks 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 41 wordsI rise today to commemorate the fifth annual Tunnel to Towers William ``Billy’’ Kelly Memorial Golf Classic held this morning in Peachtree City, Georgia, in remembrance of the Americans who lost their lives from the terrorist attacks on September 11, 2001.¹Greeting Anecdote · 55 wordsTwo years ago, I was honored to attend this charity tournament alongside my dear friend, Nancy Holland, a beloved leader in our community.² Nancy introduced me to Robyn Walensky, a former news reporter and survivor of September 11, who founded this tournament with her husband, Greg, in memory of retired NYPD Officer William ``Billy’’ Kelly.³⁴Anecdote Claims · 84 wordsOfficer Kelly deployed to Ground Zero and was assigned to the forensics unit responsible for sifting through debris from the World Trade Center to help bring closure to families who lost loved ones.⁵ As a result of his tireless service with the NYPD, Officer Kelly was sadly diagnosed with, and passed away from, a September 11-related cancer.⁶ This morning, the tournament named for Officer Kelly honored the memory and family of fallen Carrollton Police Officer Dustin Krish, whose watch ended on June 9, 2026.⁷ Thanks · 17 wordsMay the memories of heroes like Officer Kelly and Officer Krish inspire generations of Americans to come.Thanks Greeting · 9 wordsCelebrating Birthday of Harvey Wortham, Coweta County’s Oldest Veteran⁸Greeting

At a glance

Lost points for
Little substanceMuch of this statement went to praise, blame, greetings, routine procedure or general stories rather than reasons, requests or specific points.

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What the tags mean

Signal · 39

5 of 5 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “I rise today to commemorate the fifth annual Tunnel to Towers William ``Billy’’ Kelly Memorial Golf Classic held this morning in Peachtree City, Georgia, in remembrance of the Americans who lost their lives from the terrorist attacks on September 11, 2001.”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
A story that illustrates instead of making a point.What the tags mean “Two years ago, I was honored to attend this charity tournament alongside my dear friend, Nancy Holland, a beloved leader in our community.”An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
A story that illustrates instead of making a point.What the tags mean “Nancy introduced me to Robyn Walensky, a former news reporter and survivor of September 11, who founded this tournament with her husband, Greg, in memory of retired NYPD Officer William ``Billy’’ Kelly.”An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “May the memories of heroes like Officer Kelly and Officer Krish inspire generations of Americans to come.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “Celebrating Birthday of Harvey Wortham, Coweta County’s Oldest Veteran”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · no score

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Respect · no score

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Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Clarity · 100

0 of 5 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Nothing lost points.

Claims · 8

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“the fifth annual Tunnel to Towers William ``Billy’’ Kelly Memorial Golf Classic held this morning in Peachtree City, Georgia”The fifth annual Tunnel to Towers William ‘Billy’ Kelly Memorial Golf Classic was held in Peachtree City, Georgia on September 14, 2026.search
2“Two years ago, I was honored to attend this charity tournament alongside my dear friend, Nancy Holland”Brian Jack attended the Tunnel to Towers William ‘Billy’ Kelly Memorial Golf Classic alongside Nancy Holland in 2024.search
3“Robyn Walensky, a former news reporter and survivor of September 11, who founded this tournament with her husband, Greg”Robyn Walensky, a former news reporter and September 11 survivor, founded the tournament with her husband Greg.search
4“in memory of retired NYPD Officer William ``Billy’’ Kelly”The tournament was founded in memory of retired NYPD Officer William ‘Billy’ Kelly.search
5“Officer Kelly deployed to Ground Zero and was assigned to the forensics unit responsible for sifting through debris from the World Trade Center”Retired NYPD Officer William ‘Billy’ Kelly served at Ground Zero in the forensics unit sifting World Trade Center debris.search
6“passed away from, a September 11-related cancer”William ‘Billy’ Kelly died of a cancer linked to September 11.search
7“honored the memory and family of fallen Carrollton Police Officer Dustin Krish, whose watch ended on June 9, 2026”Carrollton Police Officer Dustin Krish died on June 9, 2026, and the 2026 tournament honored his memory and family.search
8“Harvey Wortham, Coweta County’s Oldest Veteran”Harvey Wortham of Coweta County is the county’s oldest veteran.search

Analyzed on 2026-09-16