A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 8%Claims 66%Reasoning 13%Greeting 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 24 wordsI rise today to share a story about an unpayable debt, a promise kept across generations, and the true meaning of the American Dream.ProcedureMr. Speaker, Claims · 197 words75 years ago, a young refugee named Myung-Hee Seol, having survived a brutal foreign occupation and the shadow of communism, fought for his life in the Korean war.1On a frozen, desolate hill, an American marine pulled him from the brink of death--igniting a spark of gratitude that would shape a family’s destiny forever.Decades later, his son, the international artist Kacey Seol, poured his heart into honoring that nameless marine.He created Alliance 70, a breathtaking 10-foot canvas composed of 300,000 microscopic historic images of both nations harmonizing into one powerful unit that now hangs permanently inside the Pentagon.2It is a stunning, living monument to the alliance that bought his family’s freedom.Today, that sacred promise is fulfilled at Rock Island Arsenal in my district.The refugee’s grandson, Dr. Jason Seol--serving dually as an U.S. Army Reserve officer and an Army civilian at First Army Headquarters--is living the American Dream his grandfather could only imagine.3He also pioneered their innovative Holistic Health and Fitness, H2F, martial arts program, training our Nation’s soldiers in physical and mental readiness.4As we continue celebrating 250 years of our Nation, the Seol family reminds us freedom is not free.5Reasoning · 39 wordsYou earn it daily by what you do for your family, your community, and your country.Their 75-year journey is the ultimate testament that American freedom is a priceless gift that is meant to be paid forward and preserved.Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 13 wordsI wish a very happy birthday to my sister-in-law, Susan.Happy birthday, Susan.GreetingMr. Speaker, Greeting · 25 wordsI wish a happy birthday to my husband, Curt Meeks.Happy birthday to my husband, and I hope he has many more birthdays to come.Greeting