Analysis · Floor speech · beta

John Joyce

108 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Greeting 44%Claims 49%Positioning 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 23 wordstoday, I rise to recognize Donna Mills of Hesston on her election as the national president of the Veterans of Foreign Wars Auxiliary.1Greeting Claims · 53 wordsA life member of the Standing Stone VFW Post 1754 in Huntingdon, Donna has served the VFW Auxiliary in numerous roles, including auxiliary, district, 2and department president. Donna joined the organization at the age of 16 on the eligibility of her grandfather, who had served in the U.S. Army during World War II.3 Positioning · 8 wordsHer commitment to the VFW Auxiliary is exemplary.Positioning Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 24 wordson behalf of constituents throughout Huntingdon County and the entire 13th Congressional District, I congratulate Donna on her election to this impactful leadership position.Greeting

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