Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

John J. McGuire III

128 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 9%Procedure 9%Anecdote 15%Claims 30%Positioning 16%Thanks 15%The ask 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chairman, Greeting · 11 wordsI thank Chairman Rogers and Ranking Member Smith for their leadership.Greeting Mr. Chairman, Procedure · 11 wordsI rise in support of this historic National Defense Authorization Act.Procedure Anecdote · 19 wordsIn the Navy, we used to say: The more you sweat in peace, the less you bleed in war.Anecdote Claims · 10 wordsFor decades, our Defense Industrial Base was allowed to decay, Hidden agencyPositioning · 21 wordsbut thanks to President Trump, our Secretary of War, and this Armed Services Committee, we are finally turning the ship around.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsThis bill supercharges our industrial base and builds on last year’s acquisition reforms. For Virginia’s Fifth District, this bill unleashes local expertise in munitions manufacturing and next-generation nuclear power. Thanks · 19 wordsWe wouldn’t have a country without our men and women in uniform. We owe them the best we have.Thanks Mr. Chairman, The ask · 8 wordsI urge my colleagues to support this bill.

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