The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 17%Claims 51%Positioning 28%The ask 4%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Chairman, Thanks · 6 wordsI thank the chairman for yielding.ThanksClaims · 130 wordsEach of us swore an oath to support and defend the U.S. Constitution.It is the basis for which we serve.Within our Constitution is the enumerated responsibility of Congress to raise an army and maintain a navy.Our committee fulfilled our constitutional duty when we reported the National Defense Authorization Act to the floor today.1As our chairman indicated, we are delivering on President Trump’s request to authorize the first of two defense appropriations, including this authorization of $1.15 trillion.2While there is much to be made about the generational investments in ships and aviation, this bill also fully supports the sustainment of the defense enterprise.Vague promiseIt strengthens our Nation’s commitments to our servicemembers and their families, and it delivers major quality-of- life initiatives, including significant funding for facilities.Vague promisePositioning · 46 wordsNow, it is easy for some Members to reject this bill because it provides too much money for our national security.Theirs is a false hope that a chaotic and irreverent global disorder will never reach the shores of our magnificent Nation.I reject this premise.PositioningClaims · 18 wordsI believe we are already in a strategic race for the continued rise and stability of our Nation.Positioning · 11 wordsThis defense budget sits as the cornerstone of this great enterprise.PositioningThe ask · 12 wordsWe need to fulfill our constitutional responsibility, and we need it now.Thanks · 29 wordsI thank my Subcommittee on Readiness ranking member, Mr. John Garamendi, and our personnel and professional staff that serve our Subcommittee on Readiness for their work on this bill.ThanksPositioning · 25 wordsWe are united in purpose, in making our Department of War a presence to be respected in both peace and, if necessary, prevail in conflict.PositioningThanks · 14 wordsI commend Chairman Rogers and Ranking Member Smith for delivering this magnificent defense bill.Thanks