Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Tim Moore

192 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Greeting 11%Claims 54%Procedure 4%Positioning 15%Thanks 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise today to honor the life and legacy of Steve Stroud, a friend and a true leader who transformed North Carolina.Greeting Claims · 25 wordsAfter attending North Carolina State University, he built one of North Carolina’s most respected commercial real estate firms, shaping the growth of the Triangle region.1 Procedure · 7 wordsHis impact extends far beyond commercial development.Procedure Claims · 56 wordsAs the first chairman of the Centennial Authority, he played a pivotal role in the building of what is now known as the Lenovo Center and bringing the Carolina Hurricanes to North Carolina.2 His determination helped secure our State’s first major league professional sports franchise, boosting economic growth, tourism, 3and pride throughout all of our communities. Positioning · 29 wordsHe was a leader who saw possibilities where others saw obstacles. He believed in North Carolina, invested in our people, and dedicated his life to creating opportunities for others.Positioning Claims · 22 wordsFrom humble roots in Rutherford County to the Research Triangle, he left a positive, lasting impact on communities all across North Carolina. Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordsas we mourn his passing, may we remember Steve Stroud for his enduring legacy of leadership, service, and love of our great State. Our prayers are with his family and friends.Thanks

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