Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Seth Magaziner

264 words · 10 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Claims 39%Reasoning 6%Positioning 13%The ask 35%Thanks 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 61 wordsin recent days, three more American servicemembers have been killed in the Iran war, 1while another is missing, 2and 1,600 civilians have been killed--not combatants--with our tax dollars.3 Here at home, the average price of gasoline is above $4 a gallon again, 4and we continue to spend billions of dollars of taxpayer money on this unnecessary war that President Trump started.5 Reasoning · 16 wordsThis is money that could have been spent to make people’s lives better here at home. Positioning · 25 wordsPresident Trump got us into this war for no good reason, with no good plan, 6and no regard for the pain that it is causing.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsThe American people are tired of endless wars, tired of unnecessary bloodshed, tired of children being bombed in their schools with our tax dollars, and tired of our best and brightest coming home in caskets for a war that nobody can explain. Positioning · 10 wordsIt is time to put the adults back in charge.Positioning The ask · 71 wordsPut experienced negotiators at the table to find an end to this unnecessary war, not the President’s relatives and real estate buddies.Vague promise It is time to elect a new majority here in Congress that takes our responsibility to be a check on the President seriously. We need people here in Congress who have the courage to say ``no’’ when the President has a bad idea, especially when it gets people killed. Thanks · 18 wordsWe grieve for the American servicemembers who have lost their lives in this war and for their families, ThanksThe ask · 21 wordsand we pray that the Members of this Congress can find the courage to stand up and end this unnecessary war.Vague promise

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