Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Ryan Mackenzie

154 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 25%Claims 42%Positioning 14%Thanks 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 39 wordsI rise today to recognize the service and sacrifice of Army veteran Robert ``Bob’’ Green, Jr. Bob served honorably in the United States Army from 1969 until 1975, including two tours in Vietnam with the 196th Light Infantry Brigade.1Greeting Claims · 64 wordsOver nearly 6 years of service, he rose to the rank of staff sergeant and answered our Nation’s call during one of the most challenging periods in our history.2 His courage and dedication were recognized with numerous military honors, including the Bronze Star Medal, Purple Heart, Republic of Vietnam Cross of Gallantry, Vietnam Service Medal, National Defense Service Medal, 3and a Good Conduct Medal.4 Positioning · 22 wordsThese decorations reflect not only Bob’s bravery in combat but also his steadfast commitment to serving his fellow soldiers and our country.Positioning Thanks · 29 wordsOn behalf of the people of the Lehigh Valley and the Poconos, I thank Robert Green, Jr., for his courage, sacrifice, and his honorable service to the United States.Thanks

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