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Michael Baumgartner

252 words · 14 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 6%Claims 80%Procedure 5%Aside 4%Thanks 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 16 wordsI rise today to honor Spokane native Tim Merck, an outstanding businessman, philanthropist, and family man.Greeting Claims · 44 wordsHe and his wife, Beth, have raised an outstanding family. Tim built a multimillion dollar business in Spokane from the ground up, Old World Christmas, 1which was known across the country and across the world as providing the best Christmas ornaments anyone can find. Procedure · 12 wordsToday, I also want to recognize a bit of trivia about Tim.Procedure Claims · 118 wordsWhen he sent his son and daughter to Notre Dame, he realized that there was not a leprechaun sculpture on Notre Dame’s campus, and Tim set out to rectify that. Tim and Beth Merck, along with their children, Jon and Katherine, have long demonstrated a commitment to preserving stories and dreams in their operation. Jon and Katherine fulfilled a dream for their grandmother by attending and graduating from Notre Dame.3 When they noticed that the leprechaun was not there, they reached out to the president, and today, there is this leprechaun statue at gate 10 of the Purcell Pavilion, the very gate through which the Leprechaun Legion enters the arena to cheer on their basketball and volleyball teams.2 Aside · 5 wordsThis is a tremendous story.Aside Claims · 39 wordsTim is also a very proud graduate of the University of Idaho, and upon presenting the leprechaun, he said: I guess it takes a Vandal to make sure that the students of Notre Dame have a leprechaun to celebrate. Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsTim is a great American and a great friend. I love him and Beth.Thanks Aside · 4 wordsGo Vandals. Go Irish.Aside

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