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Ben Cline

165 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
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Greeting 10%Claims 71%Thanks 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsI rise today to recognize an extraordinary Virginian whose life has been defined by service to others.Greeting Claims · 117 wordsAfter 45 years of leadership, Pam Irvine is retiring as president and CEO of Feeding Southwest Virginia.1 When Ms. Irvine founded the organization in 1981, it began with little more than a vision--and even the food bank’s first truck caught fire on the road.2 Undeterred, she persevered, building one of the Commonwealth’s leading hunger relief organizations. Under her leadership, Feeding Southwest Virginia has grown from distributing 1 million pounds of food annually to more than 20 million pounds, serving 26 counties and 9 cities, 3and helping more than 127,000 neighbors each month.4 Guided by compassion, faith, and an unwavering belief that no one should go hungry, Pam Irvine has transformed the fight against hunger throughout southwest Virginia. Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordson behalf of Virginia’s Sixth Congressional District, I thank Pamela Irvine for her extraordinary service, congratulate her on an exceptional career, and wish her every happiness in her well- deserved retirement.Thanks

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