Analysis · Floor speech · beta

David J. Taylor

246 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 9%Claims 74%Thanks 7%Positioning 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 23 wordsI rise today to recognize an outstanding southern Ohioan who has served thousands of Chillicothe families for nearly six decades, Dr. John Seidensticker.Greeting Claims · 181 wordsFollowing in his grandfather’s footsteps, John attended medical school and started working in internal medicine at the Chillicothe Hospital in 1967.1 After gaining experience, he moved over to endocrinology, which he ultimately specialized in. Over the decades of practicing medicine, John served multiple generations of Buckeye families and witnessed firsthand how advancing technologies changed the medical field. When the Chillicothe Hospital became Adena Health in the late 1990s, John was instrumental in creating their hospice program after seeing a need for additional care in our local aging population.2 John took pride in getting to know his patients over the years and became well known in the community for his genuine concern and excellent care. This year marks his retirement after an incredible 59 years of practicing medicine.3 John shared that he loves his work and will find it challenging to step back into this new season but is looking forward to spending time in his home workshop making canes and walking sticks. Even in his retirement, he will be contributing in a new way to help people meet their community’s needs. Thanks · 17 wordsI thank Dr. Seidensticker for his tremendous dedication to our community and congratulate him on his retirement.Thanks Positioning · 25 wordsIt is because of outstanding health care providers like him that generations of southern Ohio families are able to live healthier and more prosperous lives.Positioning

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