A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 6%Claims 54%Positioning 32%Thanks 7%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI rise today to recognize a homegrown veteran and great American hero, Mr. Robert Bentley.GreetingClaims · 69 wordsKnown as ``Bob’’ by his friends and family, Mr. Bentley was a student at Jefferson High School in Adams County, Ohio, in 1968, when he made the courageous decision to leave school and answer the call to serve his country as a teenager.1After attending basic and advanced military training, Bob served in Vietnam as a Specialist 4 in the United States Army from April 1969 to December 1970.2Positioning · 34 wordsBob joined countless young Americans who set aside their own personal ambitions to defend the Nation they loved.His honorable service left a lasting legacy in his family, community, and our great Buckeye State.PositioningClaims · 56 wordsI am proud to not only commend Bob for his selfless service but to congratulate him for being awarded an honorary high school diploma by the Adams County Ohio Valley School Board in recognition of his sacrifice and dedication.3My staff was honored to attend his ceremony and present him with a congressional commendation as well.4Thanks · 11 wordsWe congratulate Bob.This year, his high school education is complete.ThanksPositioning · 40 wordsVeterans like Bob continue to inspire those in southern Ohio and the whole Nation through outstanding courage, deep patriotism, and remarkable selflessness.It is heroes like him that preserve our Nation’s values and the freedoms that we hold so dear.PositioningThanks · 6 wordsWe thank Bob for his service.Thanks