Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Mark B. Messmer

127 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Statement grade
D
Average 47 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 46%Claims 24%Positioning 10%Thanks 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 32 wordsI rise today to congratulate the Barr-Reeve Vikings softball team on winning the 2026 Indiana High School Athletic Association Class 1-A State softball championship, their first State softball championship in school history.1Greeting Claims · 31 wordsWith a dominant 6-0 victory in their final game, the Vikings had an outstanding season with 32 wins and only one loss, cementing their names in the Hoosier athletic history books.23 Positioning · 13 wordsThis championship is the result of years of hard work and great perseverance.PositioningUnearned certainty Thanks · 24 wordsA great job was done by Head Coach Josh Huff, whose leadership inspired the discipline these athletes put forth to bring home this victory.ThanksHidden agency Greeting · 27 wordsCongratulations to the Barr-Reeve Vikings for making all of us proud in Daviess County and throughout the Eighth District, and may they enjoy their well-deserved summer vacation.Greeting

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