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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 330 wordsI rise to recognize an outstanding Hoosier whose dedication to our country did not end when he took off the uniform.This week, I will have the honor of welcoming Evansville Army veteran Ken Eppler and his lovely wife, Cathy, to my congressional office here at the United States Capitol.1Following his service to our Nation, Ken found great happiness in his incredible talent as a painter.He graciously lent me one of his beautiful paintings, The Enduring Spirit to display here in the Halls of Congress in honor of America’s 250th anniversary.2Ken served our Nation with honor in the United States Army, earning both Airborne and Air Assault qualifications before serving with the 101st Airborne Division during the Gulf war.34He later continued his service in the Indiana National Guard and has made us all proud as a defender of our country and a wonderful member of our community.His commitment to our Nation is reflected not only in his military service, but also in the remarkable artwork he continues to create.The Enduring Spirit depicts three colonial children standing together playing the fife and drum while proudly holding an American 250 flag.5To me, this patriotic painting is a powerful reminder that the ideals of freedom and love of country are passed from one generation down to the next.No reason givenIt is a privilege to display his incredible artwork for my colleagues and all who visit Washington, especially those Hoosiers coming to our Nation’s Capital.Ken has said that he hopes his artwork inspires students to love our country and encourages young people to learn more about our Nation’s great history.I cannot think of a better message to share with the myriads of people who travel to Washington and visit our country’s Capital.Indiana’s Eighth District is proud to call Ken Eppler one of our own, and I am honored to display his beautiful artwork which I think reflects the very best of Hoosier and American patriotism.Thanks