Analysis · Floor speech · beta

LaMonica McIver

194 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

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B–
Average 71 / 100
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Thanks 43%Claims 43%Positioning 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 38 wordsI rise today to honor the life and legacy of Joanne Rajoppi, the longtime Union County clerk who dedicated more than five decades to public service and passed away on Thursday, July 16, at the age of 78.1Thanks Claims · 62 wordsJoanne made history as Springfield’s first female mayor, later becoming the first and only woman to serve as chair of the Union County Board of Commissioners.2 She served as Union County Clerk for 30 years.3 Throughout her career, Joanne worked to modernize county government by expanding access to public records, improving election information, and creating new resources for residents throughout the county. Positioning · 27 wordsJoanne cared about our democracy and did the work of keeping it. That work is sometimes hard and thankless, but it is also important. Joanne knew that.Positioning Claims · 22 wordsA six-time recipient of the National Association of Counties Achievement Award, Joanne’s leadership and innovation left a lasting impact on New Jersey.4 Thanks · 45 wordsOn behalf of New Jersey’s 10th Congressional District, I extend my deepest condolences to Joanne’s family, friends, colleagues, all of those who loved her so much, and all those whose lives she touched throughout her extraordinary commitment to public service. May she rest in peace.Thanks

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