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Brian K. Fitzpatrick

232 words · 14 sentences · 17 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 90 / 100
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Greeting 4%Claims 66%Anecdote 12%Thanks 13%The ask 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 10 wordsI thank the chairman for his work in this regard.Greeting Claims · 59 wordsI am proud to co-lead this critical legislation, Mr. Speaker, to reauthorize the Breast Cancer Education and Awareness Requires Learning Young, or EARLY Act, a proven lifesaving initiative that promotes early detection and education for young and high-risk women. Breast cancer remains the most common cancer among women, with over 300,000 new cases and 42,000 projected deaths in 2025.1 Anecdote · 29 wordsI have seen the power of early detection up close, Mr. Speaker. Both my mom and my sister are breast cancer survivors. This is a very, very personal issue.Anecdote Claims · 63 wordsIt shows how early detection is the most effective tool there is to improve outcomes. Also included in this legislation is the SCREENS for Cancer Act, which I am proud to co-lead. This legislation reauthorizes the National Breast and Cervical Cancer Early Detection Program, expanding services to ensure more Americans, especially those who are low income or underinsured, can receive early lifesaving care.2 Mr. Speaker, Claims · 30 wordspassing H.R. 4541 is a critical step in ensuring that more Americans have access to early detection services and education. We can prevent needless suffering and needless loss of life. Thanks · 31 wordsI thank my co-chair of the House Cancer Caucus, Representative Debbie Wasserman Schultz, for leading the EARLY Act, 3and Representative Morelle for his work in leading the SCREENS for Cancer Act.4Thanks Mr. Speaker, The ask · 10 wordsI urge all my colleagues to support this bipartisan legislation.

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