Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Mark Takano

163 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Procedure 7%Claims 39%Anecdote 30%Reasoning 11%The ask 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 12 wordsI rise to commemorate the 81st anniversary of the bombing of Hiroshima.Procedure Claims · 25 wordsAugust 6, 81 years ago--which will happen in a couple of weeks--the first instance of a nuclear weapon being deployed against a civilian population occurred.1 Anecdote · 49 wordsMy cousin, Kikue Takagi, survived the bombing because she was sick and stayed home instead of being at the city center at ground zero with her middle school classmates. The vast majority of her middle school classmates perished that morning. She is a ``hibakusha’’; ``survivor’’ of the atomic bombing.Anecdote Claims · 39 wordsThe U.S. and Russia had the New START Treaty which limited the number of nuclear warheads in both of their respective arsenals.2 This year the Trump administration allowed it to expire, dealing a major blow to arms control efforts.3 Reasoning · 18 wordsWe must not allow negligence or indifference to lead to a disaster in the absence of diplomatic safeguards.Vague promise Mr. Speaker, The ask · 20 wordsI call on Congress, the President, and all of us to return to leadership in reversing the arms control race.Vague promise

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