A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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Madam Speaker, Claims · 122 wordsat this point my community in northern Virginia has so many data centers that if it were a country, it would be fourth in all countries in the number of data centers.1There are actually many more, actually hundreds more, potentially, on the way.Virginians, our community, have been paying the price for years now.The price is transmission lines going through homes, schools, and historic sites.The price is worse air quality, and the price is higher utility bills.Now people are fighting back, and we are winning.That is because last week, the people of Prince William County spoke out and pushed back about a massive, new data center complex spanning almost 750 football fields.2That project was unanimously rejected, 3Reasoning · 6 wordsbut the fight is not over.Claims · 29 wordsNew transmission lines are being proposed to support the data center industry in Prince William County.4Projects like the Nokesville-Bristow transmission line are threatening homes, small farms, 5and livelihoods.Reasoning · 67 wordsThere is a better way.One way is to underground those lines, and the data centers need to pay for it, not the community.This will protect our farmland, homes, and schools.Also, it sets the tone that data centers and private companies cannot demand new energy infrastructure and then pass along the costs to the community, because our communities have had enough of high utility costs.Claims · 23 wordsThey have had enough of transmission lines next to schools and homes, and enough of the noise, pollution, and loss of green space.Reasoning · 17 wordsIf we work together, we can push companies to underground these lines and pay their fair share.Vague promisePositioning · 12 wordsIn the meantime, I join my community in saying: Enough is enough.Positioning