Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Susie Lee

160 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
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Greeting 16%Claims 56%Positioning 22%Thanks 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 25 wordsI rise today to congratulate Tami Hance-Lehr, a pillar in Nevada’s nonprofit and education community and a dear friend of mine, on her well-earned retirement.Greeting Claims · 90 wordsTami has over three decades of leadership and the last 9 years as president of Communities in Schools, an organization that is near and dear to me.1 Communities in Schools of Nevada serves more than 100,000 students in 117 high-needs schools across our State, providing students with a one-on-one relationship with a caring adult to remove barriers and help students stay in school.2 Under Tami’s leadership, Communities in Schools experienced unprecedented growth. She expanded the reach of CIS and made a lifelong impact on thousands of students across the State. Positioning · 20 wordsThroughout her career, Tami has helped prove that when young people have the support they need, they can achieve anything.Positioning Thanks · 10 wordsI thank Tami for her dedication and belief in students.Thanks Positioning · 15 wordsAs she steps into retirement, I know that her passion for serving others will remain.Positioning

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