Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Burgess Owens

179 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 24%Claims 21%Positioning 36%Thanks 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 43 wordsI rise today to recognize my outgoing chief of staff, Mr. Lee Lonsberry, a beloved fixture here on the Hill and one of Utah’s most trusted voices. This end of this week marks the conclusion of a decade of Lee’s exemplary public service.1Greeting Claims · 23 wordsBefore joining my office, Lee served as communications director for two distinguished members of Utah’s delegation in both the House and the Senate.2 Positioning · 65 wordsAs my chief of staff, Lee revealed his greatest gifts and talent, a style of leadership that has built a beautiful culture of service and family. Lee has earned the respect and admiration of everyone who has had the privilege of working with him. We are excited to see him take those skills of service, patience, encouragement, and as a strategist into his next chapter.Positioning Claims · 14 wordsWe know, as has been his last chapter, it will be a successful one.Unearned certainty Thanks · 34 wordsI thank Lee for his personal friendship, his leadership to our remarkable team, his faithful service to the people of Utah, our country, and this institution. He will be missed. Well done, my friend.Thanks

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