Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Christopher R. Deluzio

422 words · 21 sentences · 26 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 2%Procedure 7%Claims 55%Positioning 23%Aside 4%The ask 4%Promise 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 8 wordsI thank the gentleman from California for yielding.Greeting Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 21 wordsI rise in opposition to this bill. I rise in opposition to any effort to cut veterans’ benefits. Let’s be clear.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 64 wordsThis bill raises the cost of the VA Home Loan Program during a housing crisis, 1and this program and this bill cuts VA benefits for current veterans who don’t have them and for troops downrange right now for two of the most common conditions they may experience: 2sleep apnea and tinnitus.3 This bill sells off more VA and veterans’ care to the private sector.4 Positioning · 51 wordsIt continues the privatization push of the Trump administration and so many congressional Republicans. I am not going to take a lecture on fiscal responsibility or accept this argument from the Republicans and the Trump administration that you have to fund veterans’ programs by cutting care or benefits for other veterans.Positioning Claims · 36 wordsThe same people who have funded an Iran war at the tune of billions and billions of dollars, the same people who added nearly $5 trillion to the debt through their One Big Beautiful Bill Act, 5Aside · 17 wordswhich, by the way, has a new name now, I guess. We have lost track of that.Aside Claims · 14 wordsThat new bill, by the way, would also add $19 trillion over 30 years.6Off point Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 44 wordsthere is no problem on the Republican side with adding to the debt when it comes time to give tax breaks and tax giveaways to the ultrarich and to corporations, but when it comes time to care of veterans, now they are counting pennies.PositioningOff point Procedure · 9 wordsLet’s be crystal clear about what this bill does.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 34 wordsIt says to troops downrange right now who are in harm’s way that they have to have worse benefits than veterans have today to pay for benefits and care that other veterans have earned. Positioning · 3 wordsThat is ridiculous.PositioningNo reason given Claims · 14 wordsIt is why groups like the VFW, the IAVA, 7and others oppose this bill. The ask · 16 wordsIt is why I think Democrats and Republicans should oppose this bill on the floor today. Promise · 22 wordsFor this reason and many others, at the appropriate time, I will offer a motion to recommit this bill back to committee.8 Claims · 69 wordsIf the House Rules permitted, I would have offered the motion with an amendment to this bill. The amendment would change the offsets used in the bill. Instead of reducing the VA home loan benefit and cutting disability benefits for sleep apnea and tinnitus, it takes unobligated, appropriated but not committed, funding given to the DOD in the One Big Beautiful Bill Act and uses it as a pay-for.9

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