Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Lauren Underwood

226 words · 11 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 7%Positioning 39%Claims 21%Anecdote 7%Promise 9%Reasoning 11%The ask 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordsI rise today in support of my bill, the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act.Procedure Positioning · 54 wordsServing veterans is one of the greatest privileges we have as Members of Congress, and we must do everything that we can to ensure not only that they receive the benefits that they have earned through their service and sacrifice, Vague promisebut also that they can access those benefits with the dignity that they deserve.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsThat is why I am so proud to lead the bipartisan Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act with Congresswoman Ashley Hinson.1 Anecdote · 15 wordsAs a nurse, I have seen firsthand the benefits of breastfeeding for moms and babies.Anecdote Promise · 20 wordsMy bill will ensure that every VA medical center contains a clean, private space specifically designed for nursing and pumping.2 Positioning · 28 wordsOur veterans and their families have given so much in service to our country, and they deserve the same level of support and respect when they seek care.Positioning Reasoning · 25 wordsFor VA medical centers to meet the needs of young families, caregivers, and our hardworking VA employees, they need to be equipped with proper facilities. Claims · 27 wordsIn the VA medical centers that lack a dedicated lactation space, moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner.3 Positioning · 7 wordsThat is unacceptable. Our veterans deserve better.Positioning The ask · 14 wordsThat is why we must pass the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act now.Off point

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