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Statement grade
The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity is 58. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
Signal
46 / 100
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Relevance
0 / 100
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Reasoning
100 / 100
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Respect
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Clarity
86 / 100
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Procedure 7% Positioning 39% Claims 21% Anecdote 7% Promise 9% Reasoning 11% The ask 6%
Structure · 11 steps
Claims · 3
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 words I rise today in support of my bill, the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act. Procedure Positioning · 54 words Serving veterans is one of the greatest privileges we have as Members of Congress, and we must do everything that we can to ensure not only that they receive the benefits that they have earned through their service and sacrifice, Vague promise but also that they can access those benefits with the dignity that they deserve. Positioning Claims · 21 words That is why I am so proud to lead the bipartisan Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act with Congresswoman Ashley Hinson.1 Anecdote · 15 words As a nurse, I have seen firsthand the benefits of breastfeeding for moms and babies. Anecdote Promise · 20 words My bill will ensure that every VA medical center contains a clean, private space specifically designed for nursing and pumping.2 Positioning · 28 words Our veterans and their families have given so much in service to our country, and they deserve the same level of support and respect when they seek care. Positioning Reasoning · 25 words For VA medical centers to meet the needs of young families, caregivers, and our hardworking VA employees, they need to be equipped with proper facilities. Claims · 27 words In the VA medical centers that lack a dedicated lactation space, moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner.3 Positioning · 7 words That is unacceptable. Our veterans deserve better. Positioning The ask · 14 words That is why we must pass the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act now. Off point
At a glance
Lost points for Off point ×15 Positioning ×7 Procedure Vague promise Anecdote
Off topic None of this speech addressed the bill under debate and what it would change.
Reasons given This statement drew 3 conclusions and gave a reason for each one.
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Signal · 46
9 of 25 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I rise today in support of my bill, the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Serving veterans is one of the greatest privileges we have as Members of Congress,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and we must do everything that we can to ensure not only that they receive the benefits that they have earned through their service and sacrifice,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “but also that they can access those benefits with the dignity that they deserve.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “As a nurse, I have seen firsthand the benefits of breastfeeding for moms and babies.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Our veterans and their families have given so much in service to our country,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and they deserve the same level of support and respect when they seek care.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “That is unacceptable.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Our veterans deserve better.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 0
15 of 25 deductions are Relevance
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “I rise today in support of my bill, the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act.” The member announces support for a different bill, the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act, rather than the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Serving veterans is one of the greatest privileges we have as Members of Congress,” General praise of serving veterans, not a statement about the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and we must do everything that we can to ensure not only that they receive the benefits that they have earned through their service and sacrifice,” A general point about veterans’ benefits, not about the bill before the House.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “but also that they can access those benefits with the dignity that they deserve.” A general point about access with dignity, not about the bill before the House.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is why I am so proud to lead the bipartisan Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act with Congresswoman Ashley Hinson.” Describes her leadership of a different bill with another member, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “As a nurse, I have seen firsthand the benefits of breastfeeding for moms and babies.” A personal aside about her nursing background and breastfeeding, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “My bill will ensure that every VA medical center contains a clean, private space specifically designed for nursing and pumping.” Describes what her separate bill would do, not the Take Care of America’s Veterans Act.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Our veterans and their families have given so much in service to our country,” General tribute to veterans and their families, not about the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and they deserve the same level of support and respect when they seek care.” A general point about deserving support and respect, not about the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “For VA medical centers to meet the needs of young families, caregivers,” A general point about VA facilities meeting families’ needs, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and our hardworking VA employees, they need to be equipped with proper facilities.” A general claim about proper facilities, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In the VA medical centers that lack a dedicated lactation space, moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner.” Describes conditions motivating her separate bill, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is unacceptable.” A comment on the situation described in the previous clause, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Our veterans deserve better.” A general rhetorical point, not about the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is why we must pass the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act now.” Calls for passage of the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act, a different bill than the one under debate.
Reasoning · 100
0 of 25 deductions are Reasoning
Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.
Nothing lost points.
Conclusions found · 3
Conclusion “That is unacceptable.”
Because “In the VA medical centers that lack a dedicated lactation space, moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner.”
Conclusion “Our veterans deserve better.”
Because “and they deserve the same level of support and respect when they seek care.”
“In the VA medical centers that lack a dedicated lactation space, moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner.”
Conclusion “That is why we must pass the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act now.”
Because “My bill will ensure that every VA medical center contains a clean, private space specifically designed for nursing and pumping.”
“In the VA medical centers that lack a dedicated lactation space, moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner.”
Respect · no score
Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Clarity · 86
1 of 25 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “we must do everything that we can” No specific action, actor, measure, or standard of success is given.
Claims · 3
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “lead the bipartisan Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act with Congresswoman Ashley Hinson” Lauren Underwood is the lead sponsor of the Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act alongside Congresswoman Ashley Hinson. search
2 “ensure that every VA medical center contains a clean, private space specifically designed for nursing and pumping” The Lactation Spaces for Veteran Moms Act would require every VA medical center to have a clean, private space designed for nursing and pumping. search
3 “moms are forced to use unsanitary places like bathrooms or struggle to find a private corner” In VA medical centers without a dedicated lactation space, nursing mothers lack suitable facilities and may resort to bathrooms or other private spots. search