Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

David J. Taylor

302 words · 13 sentences · 19 clauses

Statement grade
B–
71 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 3%Procedure 4%Positioning 35%Claims 33%The ask 10%Thanks 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 9 wordsI thank Chairman Bost for yielding me the time.1Greeting Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 13 wordsI rise today in support of the Take Care of America’s Veterans Act.Procedure Positioning · 34 wordsAmerica’s veterans represent the best our country has to offer, and it is time for Congress to deliver meaningful reforms to our veterans’ benefit programs that improve the quality of life for America’s warfighters.PositioningVague promise Claims · 34 wordsThat is why I am proud to be an original cosponsor of the Take Care of America’s Veterans Act, 2which will modernize and enhance the delivery of VA benefits for veterans across our country. Positioning · 35 wordsAs we continue to celebrate America’s 250th anniversary, it is important that we realize that freedom is not free, and we wouldn’t have this amazing country without the sacrifices of countless servicemembers and their families.Positioning The ask · 20 wordsNow is the time to reaffirm Congress’ support of our veteran community and put veterans first by passing this legislation. Claims · 39 wordsI am particularly proud that this legislation includes the expansion of GI Bill benefits, increases benefits for severely disabled veterans and their families, 3and ends the wounded veterans tax, thanks to the inclusion of the Major Richard Star Act.4 Positioning · 5 wordsThese reforms are long overdue, PositioningThanks · 21 wordsand I applaud Chairman Bost and the work of the House Veterans’ Affairs Committee for their role in crafting this legislation.Thanks Claims · 26 wordsThis bill upholds the promise we made to our Nation’s veterans that upon completion of their service, we would take care of them and their families. Positioning · 27 wordsIt is our duty as temporary caretakers of our Republic to fight for those who keep us safe, and veterans are at the top of that list.Positioning Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 25 wordson behalf of southern Ohio, I thank all our veterans and their families for the countless sacrifices they have made to keep our Nation safe.Thanks Positioning · 5 wordsThis vote is for them.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 9 wordsI urge all my colleagues to support this bill.

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