A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 8%Claims 57%Thanks 27%Positioning 9%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 18 wordstonight, I rise to honor the life and legacy of Toledo resident Betty Ann Amison-Lewis, a community builder.GreetingClaims · 126 wordsAn erudite woman with a true servant’s heart, Betty looked for every opportunity she could to serve our community of northwest Ohio.As founding director of Toledo’s Grace Community Center, Betty devoted decades to others with the same grace for which the community center was named.1She supported young men and women as they navigated parenthood.She offered after-school care to thousands of children and reinvigorated Toledo seniors with a sense of belonging.2Our community will miss Betty deeply.We grieve with her loved ones.Our community celebrates her life and will remember her fondly for the tenacity with which she served others.Her life and legacy will live on in the unrelenting mission of Grace Community Center to better the lives of northwest Ohio families.Thanks · 55 wordsTo her husband, Morris; her children, Yvette, Anika, Chantel, Alvin, Alysha; stepchildren, Morris, Terrance, Myron; and her beloved grandchildren, great-grandchildren, and other family and friends who will miss her dearly, know that she was profoundly grateful and awed by your love.May Betty’s good work and positive energy live on in your minds and hearts.ThanksPositioning · 19 wordsHer amazing spirit is invincible, and I know it is alive and at work in our community and world.PositioningUnearned certaintyThanks · 5 wordsMay her life be blessed.Thanks