Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Val T. Hoyle

199 words · 11 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Claims 79%Thanks 15%Positioning 3%Aside 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 135 wordstoday, I rise in honor of Commander Gabriel Edwards, from Oakland, Oregon, who died while serving as the commanding officer of Helicopter Sea Combat Squadron 5 in the Arabian Sea.1 After 4 days of searching over 14,000 square miles, the Navy declared him lost at sea during an emergency helicopter landing.2 Gabriel earned his wings as a helicopter pilot in 2008 and received several awards during his service, including the Defense Meritorious Service Medal.3 He knew he wanted to be a pilot at just 4 years old. This is how his wife, Rebecca, described him: ``Gabe has dedicated his life to serving his country with honor, courage, and commitment. He led with humility, integrity, and compassion, always putting his people before himself. To those who served alongside him, he was a respected leader and mentor.’’ Thanks · 12 wordsMy thoughts are with Rebecca and their two children during this time.Thanks Claims · 22 wordsI am glad to know the Secretary of the Navy has directed that Edwards be posthumously promoted to the rank of captain.4 Positioning · 6 wordsHis heroism will never be forgotten, PositioningUnearned certaintyThanks · 18 wordsand I know all of us in Oregon and around the country thank him for his honorable service.ThanksUnearned certainty Aside · 6 wordsMay his memory be a blessing.Aside

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