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Herbert C. Conaway, Jr.

Democrat on Corporal Patrick D. Tillman VA Clinic 2026-07-15

376 words · 20 sentences · 29 clauses

Statement grade

Average 94 / 100

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Procedure 5%Thanks 7%Claims 75%Positioning 4%Reasoning 8%The ask 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 11 wordsI am really moved by the chairman’s comments about Mr. Tillman.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Claims · 27 wordsI rise in support of H.R. 4288 to name the Department of Veterans Affairs community-based outpatient clinic in San Jose, California, after Corporal Patrick ``Pat’’ Daniel Tillman.¹ Thanks · 14 wordsI thank my colleague, Representative Panetta, for honoring the legacy of this American hero.Thanks Claims · 211 wordsPat Tillman was born in San Jose, California, in 1976.² From 1990 to 1994, Pat attended Leland High School in San Jose, California, ³where he helped lead his team to a Central Coast Division I football championship.⁴ Mr. Tillman was offered a scholarship to play football for Arizona State University.⁵ While there, he led Arizona State to the 1997 Rose Bowl after an undefeated season.⁶ He earned three consecutive selections to the Pac-10 All-Academic Football Team, a first team Academic All- American honor, ⁷and received the NCAA post-graduate scholarship for academic and athletic excellence.⁸ After graduating ASU summa cum laude in 1998 with a bachelor of science, he was drafted to play for the Arizona Cardinals, ⁹where he played until July 2002.¹⁰ Less than 1 year after 9/11, Tillman felt a call to serve his country and enlisted in the U.S. Army.¹¹ Mr. Tillman, with his brother Kevin, who joined the Army at the same time, were both assigned to the 75th Ranger Regiment at Fort Lewis, Washington.¹² As an Army Ranger, Pat Tillman deployed in support of Operation Iraqi Freedom in 2003 and Operation Enduring Freedom in 2004.¹³ On April 22, 2004, Pat Tillman was tragically killed by friendly fire while on patrol in the rugged area of eastern Afghanistan.¹⁴ Positioning · 14 wordsPat Tillman was undeniably known as a national hero, Unearned certaintyand his service reflects that.Positioning Claims · 44 wordsHe was awarded the Silver Star and Purple Heart medals, ¹⁵and he was posthumously promoted to corporal.¹⁶ Following his death, his widow, Marie, and his family and friends established the Pat Tillman Foundation, ¹⁷which awards academic scholarships to military servicemembers, veterans, ¹⁸and their spouses. Reasoning · 30 wordsI can think of no better way to honor Mr. Tillman’s legacy and demonstrate our Nation’s continued gratitude for his service than to name this VA clinic in his honor. Mr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsI urge all Members to support this legislation, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

At a glance

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What the tags mean

Signal · 84

6 of 7 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “I yield myself such time as I may consume.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “I am really moved by the chairman’s comments about Mr. Tillman.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “I thank my colleague, Representative Panetta, for honoring the legacy of this American hero.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “Pat Tillman was undeniably known as a national hero,”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “and his service reflects that.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “and I reserve the balance of my time.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 100

0 of 7 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.

Nothing lost points.

Reasoning · 93

0 of 7 deductions are Reasoning

Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.

Nothing lost points.

Conclusions found · 2

Conclusion“I can think of no better way to honor Mr. Tillman’s legacy and demonstrate our Nation’s continued gratitude for his service than to name this VA clinic in his honor.”

Because“Pat Tillman was undeniably known as a national hero,”

“He was awarded the Silver Star and Purple Heart medals,”

“and he was posthumously promoted to corporal.”

“and his family and friends established the Pat Tillman Foundation,”

“which awards academic scholarships to military servicemembers, veterans,”

“and their spouses.”

Reason given
Conclusion“I urge all Members to support this legislation,”

Because“Pat Tillman was undeniably known as a national hero,”

“He was awarded the Silver Star and Purple Heart medals,”

“and he was posthumously promoted to corporal.”

“and his family and friends established the Pat Tillman Foundation,”

“which awards academic scholarships to military servicemembers, veterans,”

“and their spouses.”

Reason given

Respect · no score

Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Clarity · 97

1 of 7 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Something stated as certain with nothing to back it.What the tags mean “undeniably known as a national hero”The word ‘undeniably’ asserts the conclusion in place of a source.

Claims · 18

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“to name the Department of Veterans Affairs community-based outpatient clinic in San Jose, California, after Corporal Patrick ``Pat’’ Daniel Tillman”H.R. 4288 names the Department of Veterans Affairs community-based outpatient clinic in San Jose, California, after Corporal Patrick (Pat) Daniel Tillman.search
2“Pat Tillman was born in San Jose, California, in 1976”Pat Tillman was born in San Jose, California, in 1976.search
3“From 1990 to 1994, Pat attended Leland High School in San Jose, California”Pat Tillman attended Leland High School in San Jose, California, from 1990 to 1994.search
4“where he helped lead his team to a Central Coast Division I football championship”Pat Tillman helped lead his Leland High School football team to a Central Coast Division I football championship.search
5“Mr. Tillman was offered a scholarship to play football for Arizona State University”Pat Tillman was offered a football scholarship to play for Arizona State University.search
6“he led Arizona State to the 1997 Rose Bowl after an undefeated season”While at Arizona State University, Pat Tillman led the team to the 1997 Rose Bowl after an undefeated season.search
7“He earned three consecutive selections to the Pac-10 All-Academic Football Team, a first team Academic All- American honor”Pat Tillman was selected to the Pac-10 All-Academic Football Team three consecutive times and earned first team Academic All-American honors.search
8“received the NCAA post-graduate scholarship for academic and athletic excellence”Pat Tillman received the NCAA post-graduate scholarship for academic and athletic excellence.search
9“After graduating ASU summa cum laude in 1998 with a bachelor of science, he was drafted to play for the Arizona Cardinals”Pat Tillman graduated from Arizona State University summa cum laude with a bachelor of science in 1998 and was drafted to play for the Arizona Cardinals.search
10“he played until July 2002”Pat Tillman played for the Arizona Cardinals until July 2002.search
11“Less than 1 year after 9/11, Tillman felt a call to serve his country and enlisted in the U.S. Army”Pat Tillman enlisted in the U.S. Army less than one year after the September 11, 2001 attacks.search
12“were both assigned to the 75th Ranger Regiment at Fort Lewis, Washington”Pat Tillman and his brother Kevin, who joined the Army at the same time, were both assigned to the 75th Ranger Regiment at Fort Lewis, Washington.search
13“Pat Tillman deployed in support of Operation Iraqi Freedom in 2003 and Operation Enduring Freedom in 2004”Pat Tillman deployed in support of Operation Iraqi Freedom in 2003 and Operation Enduring Freedom in 2004.search
14“On April 22, 2004, Pat Tillman was tragically killed by friendly fire while on patrol in the rugged area of eastern Afghanistan”Pat Tillman was killed by friendly fire while on patrol in eastern Afghanistan on April 22, 2004.search
15“awarded the Silver Star and Purple Heart medals”Pat Tillman was awarded the Silver Star and Purple Heart medals.search
16“he was posthumously promoted to corporal”Pat Tillman was posthumously promoted to the rank of corporal.search
17“his family and friends established the Pat Tillman Foundation”Following Pat Tillman’s death, his widow Marie and his family and friends established the Pat Tillman Foundation.search
18“awards academic scholarships to military servicemembers, veterans”The Pat Tillman Foundation awards academic scholarships to military servicemembers, veterans, and their spouses.search

Analyzed on 2026-09-15