Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Mike Bost

311 words · 17 sentences · 22 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 95 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 5%Claims 66%Anecdote 7%Reasoning 19%The ask 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Claims · 77 wordsI rise today in support of H.R. 6963, to designate the community-based outpatient clinic of the Department of Veterans Affairs in Lafayette, Louisiana, 1as the Rodney C. Hamilton Sr. VA Clinic sponsored by Representative Higgins.2 At just 17 years old, Rodney Hamilton enlisted in the United States Marine Corps out of Lafayette, Louisiana, to serve his country.3 He would go to serve in the Korean war, 4where he was wounded in combat and received the Purple Heart.5 Anecdote · 22 wordsAs a fellow marine, I know that the Marine Corps leaves a mark on every man and woman that earns the title.Anecdote Claims · 127 wordsFor Rodney, this sense of duty did not end when he returned home. He came back to Lafayette and continued serving by working to improve the lives of fellow veterans across southwest Louisiana. He served in Lafayette city government from 1968 to 1972 and later founded the Southwest Louisiana Veterans Action Coalition, giving local veterans a stronger voice and fighting to make sure their needs were met.67 That advocacy helped lead to one of his most lasting accomplishments, the establishment of the VA clinic in Lafayette. When the clinic opened in 2016, it brought VA care closer to home for veterans across the region and reflected years of work by Rodney Hamilton and others who believed Lafayette veterans deserved better access to the care they had earned.8 Reasoning · 58 wordsNaming this facility in his honor would recognize a marine, a Purple Heart recipient, and a community leader whose work continues to serve veterans today. H.R. 6963 is a fitting tribute to Rodney Hamilton, Sr., a man who served his country in war, returned home to serve his community, and never stopped standing up for his fellow veterans. Mr. Speaker, The ask · 10 wordsI urge all of my colleagues to support H.R. 6963, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

Analyzed on