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Barry Loudermilk

221 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

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Thanks 14%Claims 55%Anecdote 8%Positioning 24%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsI thank my good friend, the chairman of the Veterans’ Affairs Committee for bringing this bill to the floor.1Thanks Claims · 51 wordsAs the Representative of Georgia `s 11th Congressional District and a veteran of the United States Air Force, I proudly rise today in support of H.R.2 5362 to name the Department of Veterans Affairs multispecialty clinic in Marietta, Georgia, 3as the Colonel Michael H. Boyce Department of Veterans Affairs Multispecialty Clinic. Anecdote · 18 wordsAs he was to many, Mike Boyce was a friend of mine, who unfortunately passed away in 2022.4Anecdote Positioning · 29 wordsMike took his duties to our country and our community seriously. Like a true patriot, Mike spent much of his life in service to his community, State, and Nation.Positioning Claims · 70 wordsThroughout his service in the Marine Corps and later in elected office as the chairman of the Cobb County Board of Commissioners, Mike was a tireless advocate for the health and welfare of our Active-Duty servicemen and veterans.5 Mike worked to ensure our servicemembers had the tools to succeed and was instrumental in establishing the Cobb County VA Clinic, 6which remains a vital resource for those who served our country. Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 23 wordsrecognizing Colonel Boyce through this legislation is a fitting tribute to an American hero whose service and advocacy inspired so many, including myself.Positioning Thanks · 11 wordsI greatly appreciate his wife, Judy, for continuing his incredible legacy.Thanks

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