Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Josh Gottheimer

510 words · 34 sentences · 49 clauses

Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 9%Procedure 2%Claims 40%Positioning 28%Anecdote 13%Reasoning 2%The ask 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI thank my very good friend from New Jersey as well as my friends on the other side for their support.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI rise in support of my bill, H.R. 6007.1Procedure Claims · 17 wordsToday, this House will come together and do something simple but important: honor a great American hero. Mr. Speaker, Claims · 59 wordsTony Gallopo, as you have heard, was a brave Navy veteran, vice commander of the New Jersey Department of The American Legion, 2and commander of American Legion Post 86 in Newton, New Jersey.3 He spent time in Bergen County and Sussex County. He was a firefighter.4 He was a man who served and then came back and served more. Positioning · 17 wordsFor years, my good friend did what a lot of people talk about but few actually do.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsHe fought every single day to make sure our veterans got the healthcare they earned and deserved and to make sure they were looked out for. Positioning · 18 wordsHe never forgot anyone, and that is why he was such a special man. We all miss him.Positioning Claims · 101 wordsTony was instrumental in opening the Sussex County, New Jersey, Veterans Affairs Clinic in 2017, the CBOC.5 He and I worked side by side, cutting through red tape to get veterans real referrals, real specialists, and real healthcare--healthcare that they earned and deserved. Sadly, Tony passed away in 2020, leaving behind his wife, Betsy; 6his brilliant daughters, Ashley, Sarah, 7and Ally; and an incredible legacy of helping those in need. Today’s vote on this bill will honor his name and his work at the very clinic he helped to build. I can tell you, Mr. Speaker, he literally helped build it. Anecdote · 29 wordsWe sat at a picnic bench right outside the clinic many times talking about how we could make it better and how we could deliver more service to veterans.Anecdote Positioning · 52 wordsHe never forgot that for a second. He never forgot the country he served, and he never forgot the flag he saluted every day with such great pride. It is Americans like him we should all look up to. It is Americans like him who built this great country for 250 years.Positioning Reasoning · 8 wordsIt is why we should honor him today. Positioning · 25 wordsThis isn’t partisan. It is just common sense. It is what we owe every person who ever wore the uniform and protected our great Nation.Positioning Thanks · 14 wordsI thank his family--Betsy, Ashley, Sarah, and Ally--for sharing Tony with all of us.Thanks Anecdote · 10 wordsI know how hard it is right now without him, AnecdotePositioning · 20 wordsbut his legacy goes on, and it looms large. He lives on. No one has forgotten him for a minute.Positioning Anecdote · 29 wordsWhen we go to The American Legion, we all talk about him. There are pictures everywhere, and he continues to be a light in New Jersey, in our country, AnecdotePositioning · 12 wordsand for all of us as somebody we should look up to.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsI urge the House to pass this legislation, Thanks · 9 wordsand I am so grateful for the bipartisan support.Thanks The ask · 26 wordsI also urge the Senate--I know Senator Cory Booker has taken the lead on this--to take this up quickly and honor our great hero, Tony Gallopo.8

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