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Susan M. Collins

322 words · 16 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Claims 69%Greeting 19%Procedure 6%Positioning 6%

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Mr. President, Claims · 19 wordson March 21, 1901, a town in Aroostook County was incorporated and named after the region’s pristine clear waters.1 Greeting · 41 wordsToday, it is a great joy to join the people of Crystal, ME, in celebrating the 125th anniversary of a town that epitomizes rural life in the northern parts of our country and people who have shown the power of resiliency.Greeting Procedure · 11 wordsCrystal’s founding was just one piece of an already illustrious history.Procedure Claims · 96 wordsFirst established by William Young of Searsmont in 1839 as Township No. 4, Fifth Range West of the Easterly Line of the State, Crystal quickly classified itself as a plantation--and not just in name.2 Drawn by the fertile land, settlers determined that potato cultivation could be successful, and they started shipping their products southward on railroads that exist to this day. By the mid-1900s, the town of Crystal began facing the challenges that afflict many rural communities, leading to population decline that rendered Crystal one of the smallest and most rural communities in the entire State. Positioning · 6 wordsYet the people of Crystal persevered.Positioning Claims · 90 wordsTheir farming and logging industries remain strong, creating an economic model for formerly industrialized towns. Throughout its history, Crystal has been recognized as having outstanding natural resources. Crystal Bog, also known as the 1000 Acre Bog, encompasses an extensive area of wetlands found south of Fish Stream.3 This area represents one of Maine’s best examples of a Domed Bog Ecosystem and is classified as a National Natural Landmark.4 It also supports some of the State’s most diverse fens, plants, and animals, including circumneutral fen, Clayton’s copper butterfly, 5and swamp-fly honeysuckle. Procedure · 9 wordsCrystal’s 125th anniversary is more than just a celebration.Procedure Positioning · 14 wordsIt is recognition of a people who have thrived in the face of adversity.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsWhile every town has its unique challenges, I am sure that Crystal’s best days lie ahead. Greeting · 20 wordsI congratulate the town of Crystal, ME, on this wonderful achievement, and I look forward to witnessing its bright future.Greeting

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