Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Thom Tillis

440 words · 21 sentences · 28 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 85 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Aside 3%Claims 33%The ask 19%Promise 20%Positioning 18%Thanks 2%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Procedure · 4 wordsNo, quite the contrary.Procedure Aside · 13 wordsThat is why I am saying--look, I love saying I told you so, AsideClaims · 12 wordsand I believed that that was going to be the case here. The ask · 64 wordsBut, Senator Cornyn, let me just say it for anybody--for the 20 people watching on C-SPAN--and, hopefully, some will cover our statements--I defy anybody--anyone--who opposed this bill, who scored it, who threatened Members to vote against it, I defy them to come to my office and find one example of what they were telling people to oppose this bill that actually came to pass--one. Procedure · 5 wordsHere it is: Public challenge.Procedure Claims · 62 wordsGuys, you who so--you were out there. You were emailing. You were raising money. You were saying the world is going to end, guns are going to be confiscated, that straw purchases were going to destroy--you know, that we weren’t going after trafficking, that we were going after law-abiding officers, and their licenses were going to be--all these things, all this noise. Promise · 32 wordsI will dedicate an hour to somebody who wants to come into my office and prove to me that one--one--negative behavior by any State or local government or Federal Government has occurred. Procedure · 5 wordsThis is what happened, folks.Procedure Promise · 36 wordsBut you want to come to my office, I will guarantee you, you refer to this C-SPAN segment and you want to come to my office and prove that something bad happened, I will take that. Positioning · 9 wordsMy guess is, I will get that hour back, PositioningProcedure · 6 wordsand that is what I mean.Procedure Claims · 43 wordsYou know, at some point on these tough issues, we keep kicking the can down the road because we let people off the hook for saying things that are patently untrue and then not hold them to account a year or two later. Procedure · 7 wordsWell, I am here to tell you: ProcedureClaims · 11 wordsI am here for the next 173 days before I retire.1Off point The ask · 18 wordsAnybody who wants to come in and prove one bad outcome from this bill, give me a call. Claims · 16 wordsAnd, Senator Cornyn, again, you and I are both--we are both here for another 173 days.2 Positioning · 27 wordsWe got--and I say that not because I am counting the days to leave, but I am counting the days that we have to make an impact.PositioningOff point Promise · 20 wordsAnd I hope I can continue to work with you on this and other bills to even make it better.Vague promise Positioning · 43 wordsWe are, unabashedly, unapologetically, pro-Second Amendment Republicans. But we are smart about it, and we have the courage to step up when we see a change can be made that will keep us true to those values but also keep our communities safer.Positioning Thanks · 7 wordsAnd I appreciate your leadership on this.Thanks

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