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Vern Buchanan

301 words · 21 sentences · 32 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 9%Claims 64%Reasoning 15%Anecdote 9%The ask 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 13 wordsI rise today in strong support of my bill, the Sunshine Protection Act, ProcedureClaims · 24 wordswhich would make daylight saving time permanent and finally end the biannual clock switch.1 Twice a year, Americans are forced to change their clocks. Reasoning · 9 wordsThese changes disrupt their schedule for no good reason. Claims · 15 wordsThe outdated practice is frustrating for families, workers, schools, and small businesses across the country. Procedure · 5 wordsLet me just tell you, ProcedureAnecdote · 19 wordsas someone who has been in business for 30 years, this is gigantic, especially for the small business person.Anecdote Claims · 22 wordsThat additional hour a day, at least in Florida but across the country, makes a big difference in terms of doing business. Reasoning · 7 wordsIdeally, it helps not just small businesses, Claims · 12 wordsbut small businesses create most of the jobs in Florida, as well. Reasoning · 5 wordsIt is key to both. Claims · 23 wordsPolling shows that two-thirds of Americans want to unlock the clock.2 My bill is simply a solution to make daylight saving time permanent. Reasoning · 19 wordsAllowing an extra hour of sunlight in the evening gives families more time for outside sports, activities, and school. Claims · 5 wordsIt stimulates small business and, Procedure · 5 wordsas I said, job creation; ProcedureClaims · 12 wordsretail tourism; and provides more time for youth sports and outside recreation. Procedure · 5 wordsLet me just tell you: ProcedureAnecdote · 7 wordsYou see a lot of kids today.Anecdote Claims · 10 wordsThe number is 20 percent of children who are obese.3 Reasoning · 6 wordsThey need to be out more. Claims · 70 wordsThis will make a difference for them.Vague promise There are also significant health benefits associated with DST that would prevent over 200,000 cases of stroke per year.4 It would make a big difference, as well, for nearly 2 million people in terms of obesity.5 Importantly, this bill allows States to opt out in favor of standard time if that is important to them.6 Nineteen States have passed the deadline for this.7 Mr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsI urge my colleagues to support this legislation.

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