Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Jefferson Van Drew

181 words · 13 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 55%Reasoning 33%Procedure 2%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordsI rise in strong support of this bill. This is not about crime. It is about control.Positioning Reasoning · 34 wordsOnce you can flag a purchase, any purchase, you can flag a person. Once you can flag a person, you can control what they buy, what banks they use, Logical leapand even what they believe.Logical leap Positioning · 21 wordsIt is wrong. It is un-American. This bill is not just about guns. It is about the precedent that was set.PositioningHidden agency Reasoning · 26 wordsIf we allow financial institutions to become the surveillance arm of one party’s political agenda today, there will be no limit to what gets flagged tomorrow.Logical leapLogical leap Procedure · 4 wordsLet me be clear: ProcedurePositioning · 61 wordsBuying a firearm is not extremism; buying a Bible is not extremism; reading the news you choose and want to read is not extremism; exercising a constitutional right is not extremism. The extreme position is using America’s banks to build a permanent list to track who people worship, what they read, and what constitutional rights they happen to choose to exercise.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 18 wordsI urge my colleagues to vote for privacy, freedom, and the Constitution of the United States of America.

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