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Maxwell Frost

290 words · 18 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 95 / 100
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Claims 34%Positioning 6%The ask 13%Anecdote 6%Reasoning 28%Promise 7%Procedure 2%The question 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 19 wordsI strongly oppose the Protecting Privacy in Purchases Act. Sponsors claim this bill prevents the privacy of gun owners, Positioning · 17 wordsbut in reality, it protects mass shooters, terrorists, gun traffickers, Unearned certaintyand the profits of the firearms industry.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsFinancial institutions have already been using merchant codes to detect crimes like money laundering and human trafficking.1 The ask · 15 wordsThey should be allowed to use that same responsible monitoring to help prevent gun violence. Anecdote · 6 wordsI know personally why this matters.Anecdote Claims · 59 wordsThe Pulse nightclub shooter opened up six new credit cards in 8 months.2 He racked up more than $26,000 in credit card charges on guns and ammunition in the days before his killing spree in the middle of my district in my home of Orlando, Florida.3 Our system failed to turn those warning signs into an alert for police. Anecdote · 11 wordsHe murdered 49 angels in my community and wounded another 49.4Anecdote Reasoning · 44 wordsInstead of helping to prevent the next tragedy, this bill makes it easier for those warning signs to be missed yet again. It strips law enforcement of an essential tool to stop violence before it happens, making every community in our Nation less safe. Promise · 19 wordsFor this reason, at the appropriate time, I will offer a motion to recommit this bill back to committee. Reasoning · 38 wordsIf the House rules permitted, I would have offered an important amendment to make clear that nothing in this bill should prevent law enforcement from using merchant category codes to assist in investigating and preventing acts of terrorism. Mr. Speaker, The ask · 24 wordsI ask unanimous consent to insert the text of this amendment into the Record immediately prior to the vote on the motion to recommit. Procedure · 6 wordsThe SPEAKER pro tempore (Mr. DesJarlais).Procedure The question · 11 wordsIs there objection to the request of the gentleman from Florida? Claims · 4 wordsThere was no objection.

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