Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Mike Thompson

198 words · 13 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 92 / 100
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Thanks 3%Positioning 11%Claims 71%Reasoning 10%The ask 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 6 wordsI thank the gentlewoman for yielding.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsI rise in opposition to H.R. 1181, a bill which makes it harder to catch criminals and makes our communities less safe.Positioning Claims · 120 wordsToday, under current law, financial institutions are required to report suspicious transactions to law enforcement.1 They do this every day, and that helps catch human traffickers. These alerts give law enforcement leads that uncover human trafficking rings and evidence that help put these bad guys away. The bill on the floor today blocks States from using this same process to flag suspicious firearms transactions to uncover gun trafficking rings.2 Many gun traffickers don’t buy guns like responsible gun owners, and once guns are trafficked, we know bad things happen.Unearned certainty Approximately 60 percent of trafficked guns are delivered to convicted felons.3 The felons who seek out and obtain trafficked firearms are the people who pose the greatest risk to everyone’s safety. Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordsgun violence is the leading cause of death for children, for teenagers, 4and for law enforcement in the line of duty.5Off point Reasoning · 19 wordsWe should be working to break up gun trafficking rings which supply the guns that kill kids and cops. Mr. Speaker, The ask · 10 wordsI urge my colleagues to vote ``no’’ on this bill.

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