Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Riley M. Moore

520 words · 32 sentences · 37 clauses

Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 3%Positioning 32%Claims 38%Reasoning 8%Procedure 1%Anecdote 10%Thanks 7%The ask 1%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI rise in support of my bill, H.R. 1181, the Protecting Privacy in Purchases Act.1Greeting Positioning · 30 wordsMy bill preserves two fundamental rights: the right to privacy and the right to bear arms. Americans should not be forced to disclose to payment processors when they buy firearms.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsThe bill preserves Americans’ rights by prohibiting the creation of a separate merchant category code for firearms.2 Reasoning · 10 wordsThis would, of course, become a de facto gun registry.Unearned certainty Claims · 30 wordsThe bill also preempts harmful State laws and gives the Attorney General authority to take any bank or payment processor that assigns or requires a separate code to Federal court.3 Positioning · 15 wordsFor too long, the American people have had their rights undermined by the radical left.PositioningOff point Procedure · 5 wordsThe bill’s premise is simple: ProcedurePositioning · 4 wordsno gun registries, period.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsIn fact, this very body has twice prohibited these unjust registries, once in 1986 and again in 1993, to prohibit the left from destroying Americans’ rights.4 Positioning · 7 wordsHowever, the gun-grabbing left never stops trying.Positioning Claims · 44 wordsIn 2021, the progressive Amalgamated Bank lobbied the International Organization for Standardization to create a separate merchant category code for firearm retailers to advance a backdoor gun registry.5 Previously, these retailers had always been accurately categorized as miscellaneous retail stores or sporting goods stores.6 Positioning · 8 wordsAmalgamated Bank was hell-bent on tracking firearm purchases.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsIt pressured a faceless, unaccountable, foreign standards body in Geneva to stand up a new merchant category code explicitly targeting American gun owners and American businesses. Anecdote · 54 wordsWhen I was State treasurer in West Virginia, we said ``no’’ to the gun-grabbing progressive bank partnering with a European NGO destroying American rights. Under my leadership as State treasurer, West Virginia enacted one of the first bans on separate merchant category codes for firearms retailers, protecting the privacy of our State’s gun owners.7AnecdoteOff point Claims · 6 wordsNineteen States after that followed suit.8 Reasoning · 9 wordsHowever, a patchwork of State regulations is not enough. Claims · 31 wordsCalifornia, Colorado, and New York currently mandate that firearm stores have a separate merchant category code, creating a de facto registry in some of the most populous States in our country.9Logical leap Positioning · 6 wordsThis cannot be allowed to stand.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsWe have already seen the Biden administration pressure financial institutions to hand over data on their customers.10Unearned certainty Reasoning · 22 wordsA private database of gun owners falling into the hands of a future anti-gun administration is a threat that we cannot accept. Positioning · 16 wordsOur God-given right to own a firearm does not stop at the border of blue States.Positioning Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 37 wordsI thank my colleagues, Representatives Barr and Hudson, for their work on this bill. I also thank Chairman Hill for getting it across the finish line. I also thank Representative Stefanik for her leadership on this issue.Thanks Positioning · 78 wordsThese are our God-given rights, spelled out in our Constitution, and we proudly exercise them. We will not allow an elitist bank partnered with a foreign, faceless bureaucracy to rob Americans of their right to protect themselves.Vague promise In West Virginia, we don’t ask permission to protect ourselves and our families, and no American should ever have to wonder whether buying a firearm will land them on a government watch list. Privacy and gun ownership go hand in hand.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 7 wordsI urge my colleagues to vote ``yes.’’

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