The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity is 76. The grade is held to 75, 30 above Signal. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
75 / 100, held down by Signal
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI rise in support of my bill, H.R.1181, the Protecting Privacy in Purchases Act.1GreetingPositioning · 30 wordsMy bill preserves two fundamental rights: the right to privacy and the right to bear arms.Americans should not be forced to disclose to payment processors when they buy firearms.PositioningClaims · 17 wordsThe bill preserves Americans’ rights by prohibiting the creation of a separate merchant category code for firearms.2Reasoning · 10 wordsThis would, of course, become a de facto gun registry.Unearned certaintyClaims · 30 wordsThe bill also preempts harmful State laws and gives the Attorney General authority to take any bank or payment processor that assigns or requires a separate code to Federal court.3Positioning · 15 wordsFor too long, the American people have had their rights undermined by the radical left.PositioningOff pointProcedure · 5 wordsThe bill’s premise is simple: ProcedurePositioning · 4 wordsno gun registries, period.PositioningClaims · 26 wordsIn fact, this very body has twice prohibited these unjust registries, once in 1986 and again in 1993, to prohibit the left from destroying Americans’ rights.4Positioning · 7 wordsHowever, the gun-grabbing left never stops trying.PositioningClaims · 44 wordsIn 2021, the progressive Amalgamated Bank lobbied the International Organization for Standardization to create a separate merchant category code for firearm retailers to advance a backdoor gun registry.5Previously, these retailers had always been accurately categorized as miscellaneous retail stores or sporting goods stores.6Positioning · 8 wordsAmalgamated Bank was hell-bent on tracking firearm purchases.PositioningClaims · 26 wordsIt pressured a faceless, unaccountable, foreign standards body in Geneva to stand up a new merchant category code explicitly targeting American gun owners and American businesses.Anecdote · 54 wordsWhen I was State treasurer in West Virginia, we said ``no’’ to the gun-grabbing progressive bank partnering with a European NGO destroying American rights.Under my leadership as State treasurer, West Virginia enacted one of the first bans on separate merchant category codes for firearms retailers, protecting the privacy of our State’s gun owners.7AnecdoteOff pointClaims · 6 wordsNineteen States after that followed suit.8Reasoning · 9 wordsHowever, a patchwork of State regulations is not enough.Claims · 31 wordsCalifornia, Colorado, and New York currently mandate that firearm stores have a separate merchant category code, creating a de facto registry in some of the most populous States in our country.9Logical leapPositioning · 6 wordsThis cannot be allowed to stand.PositioningClaims · 17 wordsWe have already seen the Biden administration pressure financial institutions to hand over data on their customers.10Unearned certaintyReasoning · 22 wordsA private database of gun owners falling into the hands of a future anti-gun administration is a threat that we cannot accept.Positioning · 16 wordsOur God-given right to own a firearm does not stop at the border of blue States.PositioningMr. Speaker, Thanks · 37 wordsI thank my colleagues, Representatives Barr and Hudson, for their work on this bill.I also thank Chairman Hill for getting it across the finish line.I also thank Representative Stefanik for her leadership on this issue.ThanksPositioning · 78 wordsThese are our God-given rights, spelled out in our Constitution, and we proudly exercise them.We will not allow an elitist bank partnered with a foreign, faceless bureaucracy to rob Americans of their right to protect themselves.Vague promiseIn West Virginia, we don’t ask permission to protect ourselves and our families, and no American should ever have to wonder whether buying a firearm will land them on a government watch list.Privacy and gun ownership go hand in hand.PositioningMr. Speaker, The ask · 7 wordsI urge my colleagues to vote ``yes.’’